Allingar's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Disgaea: Episode 3]

you did a whole lot of NOTHING!

This entire thing is straight up ripped. You did absolutely no work! The lines, graphics, everything was straight out of the game. you got some friends to come over and read what they were saying on the screen, and not even do a very good job at voice acting, and then throw it up and get a good score by duping everyone who hasnt played the game by thinking this was original material. YOU SHOULD NEVER EVER POST THIS CRAP AGAIN!

MaKd responds:

Dude, I said it was all taken directly from the game. just think of it as a tribute, or a way to let people know how awesome this game was.

[You are dreaming.]

Someone seems a little dillusional...

I'm sorry to be the one to break this to you man, but dreams don't actually have super natural powers. If you really believe that they do or that there is some sort of purpose or meaning that is beyond our comprehension behind them, then well, we should have a talk. Lol. You take it a bit to serious I think. Good Flash though.

PureCarnage responds:

Sorry, this is where you are wrong, and I am right. Besides, I have connections to people involved in military psychic research... I am in the know. And that's not a joke.

[DoomsDay War: Genesis]

Original = good

Well, I actually like the music alot, what is it from? But man, am I sick of all the DBZ crap everywhere. Suddenly characters from a crap load of other shows are becoming saiyans randomly. We need to get some original ideas going here people. Overall it wasnt all that horrible, some of the drawings looked really good, im guessing those were traced or imported since your backgrounds were really bad. The animation could have been a lot better also. But you have good directing skills, you have some good shots and progression, so focus on that aspect, and try to imporove the others. And for God's sake, try to come up with an idea thats at least half ass original.

Agent-Battousai responds:

there will be alot more original stuff

[SW R-Episode 9]

That was... interesting

Well... I'm almost not sure what to say to something like that, I mean it wasnt bad really... I'm sure we would all be lying if we didnt say we have at some point harbored the desire to wield light sabers and through people around our back yard with lightning bolts, but, at the sime time, Im not sure it made for a great flick. Its sort the crap we watch to laugh at how bad it is, but not to take seriously which I kind of think you wanted people to do. Not to be harsh or anything, but perhaps I just have a hard time watching people in street clothes fight people in holloween masks with light sabers. I dunno.

RavenJinn responds:

...allright..
I think its better, like many others.
But everyone has his own opinion..
thnx anyway

[Shadows of Chaos 1 Remake]

Well....

Ok... so, I can't stop myself from wondering... how exactly did these scientists save the human race by making nothing but males? Are these new humans capable of some kind of crazy A-sexual reproduction or something? That relization really just sort of ruined the whole thing for me but ya know. However at first I was pretty impressed by your art and animation quality, until the one clone or what not started walking around looking like a string puppet. I was on the phone with a friend commenting on how I wouldnt want you writing any scripts, but I wouldnt mind having this guy on my art team... until I saw that... it just made me sort of... laugh. Yeah... It seemed to me like you just read the giver and tried to make a poorly thought out adaptation of it. Even the idea that removing hate love and religion to create the 'prefect' human really made my chuckle. But then I am a phillosophy student so something like that has obvious obserdaties to me that others may not see. I will say this however: Keep trying. You may hit home with something one day, you seem to be on the track for a good plot even if your not there yet. If you ever want help with depth or someone to discuss possible flaws and solutions for them in you plots feal free to drop me a line.

Hybrination responds:

I don't know where you get that they are all male from... Also I didn't know about the Giver! Everyone says I copied it but I hadn't read it when I wrote this... Argh! And about the walking animation, yeah okay its not perfect, but not everyone is. And is it not true, that removing emotion, religion, and all that makes us initially "Human" would make us perfect, seeing how imperfect we initially are?

[Bushido Khaos- Episode 1]

Hillarious... even though you didn't want it to be

It is obvious that you watch too much Anime, and tried to duplicate that style... such is apprent from the zoomy lines and the shot of the shoe, for no really good reason. However... you are a bad artist, a terrible writer, (laughed a lot at, I could ask you the same question... who are you? There, you see, I DID ask you the same question, good for me! And the evil slaying polterguiest. LMAO!) and your sound was simply terrible. I say... give up... give up now. Go back to watching Anime, and dont try to make really bad ones based off the same horrid idea of, I have the cool sword that can beat evil things, so I win! Ten year olds can come up with better plot progression. Give up.

TheZebu responds:

I'll give up when I stop getting in the top weekly 20 and winning portal awards.

[LOTR: Enter the Matrix]

Good concept, but needs work

You asked for suggestions on what you could do better so I am going to give you a few. First of all, your intro was almost as long as your actual material, so either make the intro hella shorter, or add more content to the actual film. Second, your animation is terrible. the arms come off of the shoulders and at one point part of the background disapears for no apparent reason. The sound quality is not very good at all. You have pretty good artistry with your characters, however they do not match the effort put into the backgrounds at all. Try ot make things consistant. My overall suggestion is just to put a little more effort into your stuff to make it as good as you possibly can. Dont settle for something unless it is exactly what you want to see in your creation.

DarkAssailant responds:

Thanks for making a review that actually has punctuation and spelling. Im fed up of all these stupid reviews I get.

Well, its ironic really. Before I submitted it I spent a day panicking over "is there anything to improve?!?!??!" and backgrounds went to my mind. But you see... I've no idea how to draw background stuff, so I had to settle for that. I will try to put more effort into backgrounds and try to find out about shading.